User talk:Sammyturch/George Baird/Ohsun Peer Review

Hi Samantha,

Good job with the article so far, I think the text you inputed is very well written and thought out. I would encourage you to maybe break down the paragraphs more, so they are easier to read and not so text-heavy. Ohsun (talk) 01:26, 26 March 2020 (UTC)