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Article Evaluation of "Hurricane Katrina (Meteorological History Section)"
One thing that bothers me immediately is the organization of the section. Only one paragraph is dedicated to the evolution of Hurricane Katrina from a Tropical Depression into a Category 5 hurricane. Since the section is "Meteorological History", I think there should be more information on why the story rapidly intensified and why it took the track that it did. This section really only tells you surface level facts about what happened, such as the times the storm made landfall and the timeline of intensification. I feel as though this article does not provide any useful information about why this storm was so destructive or why it developed the way it did.

The article is neutral without bias from any of the editors. In terms of the sources, the information is cited, but the main source is the NWS. I think this page could benefit from the use of Research Papers; scientific papers can be complicated for the average person to read, so I think Wikipedia could be a good place for people to simplify those sources and pull out the key information. Right now people might as well just go to NOAA's website if they want to know the Meteorological History because there really isn't much additional information in this section.