User talk:Samtal93/sandbox

To start, there is no clear description above the overview. I think your article would benefit from a quick description of competitive pricing. I think your overview needs to be a bit more clear. It starts out good, but the second sentence goes "The market leader at that particular time..." The reader doesn't know what that is since you just jumped there from competitive pricing. I think you need to break down the description a bit more. The next section title "Competitive Pricing Advantages and Disadvantage" is too long. I think you should make it shorter, maybe just "Advantages and Disadvantages." Also I don't think there is enough information about the advantages and disadvantages. I think adding a list here is a good idea for the article. Lastly I think you need to make more links and cite more sources. Once you add more sources and links I think your information will be more concise and clear. Nick Aiello

This article explains competitive pricing and the concepts of competitive pricing. This article is broken down into sections, which makes it easier to read and understand. It is also of an appropriate length. The advantages and disadvantages section could do with more examples. It would be beneficial to add some wikilinks to some of the terms e.g. market, firms. Apart from editing the minor grammatical errors in the last paragraph( in the first sentence), I suggest breaking down the Competitive Pricing section into three subsections- “Below competition pricing” approach, “Above competition pricing” approach and “Parity pricing” approach. Also, if possible, give examples of markets that participate in the different types of competitive pricing.

Funmsie 19:19, 10 November 2014 (UTC)