User talk:Samtree121/sandbox

Hey Sam,

Peer review 2:

-Separate the long time periods or sections into smaller more manageable sections

-Add an Origin section to show the change Meiji Restoration created

-Add end section to explain overarching effects of the restoration in Japan

-I recommend going through each paragraph and reviewing grammar, info, and citations. Don't forget to look through the citations they already have to see if you could use them to fill in the citation gaps

Good Luck --Allycoughlan (talk) 03:53, 13 March 2019 (UTC)