User talk:SamuelFarris93/Tick infestation

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Very clear, very informative. Lead captures the most salient information broadly.

Found this to be a great point: “Ticks are found around the world, with suggestions that climate change and globalization of travel and commerce may be broadening their scope of residence (Semenza).”

I like that you included the dangerous medical sequelae (thrombocytopenia, hemorrhagic fever, etc.).

Appreciate you put a prevention and treatment portion and I'm excited to read about it. I thought the sub-headings in general made sense. Maybe more specific demographic-related information like percent infected yearly and those percentages across different states in the U.S. would be helpful- a map could be a nice illustration to show that. (Check this link out for that: https://www.cdc.gov/lyme/datasurveillance/maps-recent.html)

Overall, really great man, I’m excited to see the finished product. :) Zksoofi (talk) 18:09, 17 November 2022 (UTC)