User talk:Samuelhfko/sandbox

Great topic choice! I really enjoyed the topic as it looks at a building that was built for sustainability. The page is very well laid out and I like the bullet points for the mission and goals. Maybe if possible put a little more information in the beginning part but it still works fine. The history is a good added touch because I didn’t know all that background information on the building. The building benefits was very well laid out and to the point, which is good for Wikipedia. If possible, I don’t know if it’s out there, but some more data might be useful in some of that section, like for example in the rainwater system, how much is collected and what amount goes where? Just another note to include a reference on ventilation and possibly add a See Also Section. I know its a pain to get photos uploaded onto here, but if you could get one of the building that would be good addition. Really good job. Very interesting! Beng0202 (talk) 06:50, 1 March 2013 (UTC)