User talk:Samwolff450/sandbox

You can add more images that would be better to picture this in TV shows, overall looked really good though --Dougsitt (talk) 03:17, 10 April 2019 (UTC)

You could include some more appearances of TV shows if you can find them Change "doll's" to dolls (no apostrophe) Caranlee (talk) 20:11, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

Another thing that could be beneficial would be how the dolls have become more popular throughout the years and the recent trend of the movies/tv shows Maddywright (talk) 23:59, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

Aside from Chucky's relation to Robert and Anabelle I feel like there is more dolls that have appeared in popular culture. If you could expand with more examples then that would really bolster the strength of your section. --Ghurley1 (talk) 02:39, 1 April 2019 (UTC)

I like how you get right to the point in each section and I think that you have good information. In your second section, the word "tv" should be "TV" I believe. Additionally, I would add some more examples/ information into both sections.Montananelson (talk) 14:31, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Some inconsistencies with capitalization. TV is capitalized in the heading but not in the first sentence. Also, should "haunted" and "dolls" be capitalized in "haunted Island of dolls?" Mtatherton18 (talk) 14:32, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

Would specify you mean the movie in the sentence: Annabelle grossed a total of 256,873,813 U.S dollars. Haunted dolls have also made appearances in TV.Barborale (talk) 14:42, 3 April 2019 (UTC)

I think you should add more information about dolls.1oromo (talk) 05:50, 6 April 2019 (UTC) Good. I think some context with the story behind Robert the doll would help, I wish there was a link or something. For this: "The popularity of the first movie led way to Child's play 2, and Child's Play 3. Being a hit, Chucky made its way into pop culture, being referenced" I suggest: The success of the first movie influenced the continuation of the series with Child's Play 2, and Child's Play 3. Its popularity also earned the work references on The Simpsons and SNL. just a suggestion something like that. I would change tv to television. I think naming the episode that this refers to would be good so people can look it up and maybe saying who they is here: "In an episode of Ghost Hunters they visit a the haunted Island of dolls."Mlazarus14 (talk) 19:38, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

You might want to elaborate more on how the dolls are used in each movie for clarification. Good amount of citations for the amount of content you have. Charlieaabrams (talk) 18:08, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

One suggestion would be to describe the dolls in more detail later on, such as how they are used in the movies and what their purposes are. Larainal (talk) 17:55, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

I think you should add an internal link for Chucky and The Twilight Zone. Overall, good job!!Dmastronardi (talk) 18:30, 7 April 2019 (UTC)

Very interesting! I think it would be better if you added some context and background for all of the dolls mentioned. Sallyfried (talk) 18:31, 7 April 2019 (UTC)