User talk:Samyang0820/sandbox

Peer Review Hi Samyang0820, I have reviewed your article and I think that the overall is good. But I suggest you to, maybe, not to use "this article is about" in the beginning. I also saw that there was no data from 1944-1946 on the "Births and Deaths" table. Maybe you can add the data. And lastly, I saw that you have several sources you cited as website link. I don't think it is a correct way to cite a source, you can go to easybib.com to help cite the website or any other types of source.Tramtngoc (talk) 03:43, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Samyango820 Peer Review-Scott Slaugh
I really enjoyed reading your article! I think it is special for me because I am from Taiwan. I did not see any stats listed in your articles for some of the specific time periods. I think a chart or a table will help you go further with this analysis. Especially for visual learners like myself. I think the sources could be from journals rather than websites to make that statement fact as opposed to websites which usually are opinion based. Good luck! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Slaughs8639 (talk • contribs) 05:29, 3 April 2018 (UTC)