User talk:SandhuT/sandbox

Peer Group G peer review (Michael Healy)
I do not see any writing at all. In order to improve your lead I think it would be best if you added an intro that gives a brief overview of what it is that your page will cover. The structure, from what I can see, is nonexistent so I would recommend you have three sections in your article. One could be the summary, another could be the prominent people that were at your event, and the third could be your citations. Your coverage of the topic so far is very balanced and neutral so I would just recommend to continue with that tone. There are no sources that I can see so you should try the databases we have access to through the OSU library. Some proof reading/writing advice I would give is that you should at least put in a title. Something that I would have you add to your article is any information you can find on your topic because at the moment there is nothing visible in your sandbox. Healym24 (talk) 17:32, 12 March 2020 (UTC)