User talk:SandraNehme/sandbox

Kevin.ghoorah (talk) 17:40, 27 March 2012 (UTC) I have added new information to the heading Forthcoming galleries and exhibitions and it includes the necessary citations. >>Kevin G

Stephen Cho (talk) 20:37, 27 March 2012 (UTC) Ok, I moved the summary of the ROM from the sandbox to the actual ROM wiki page. I will add the updated information on the World Culture Galleries to both the sandbox and actual ROM page when I finish it later today. I'll also add the section on Special Exhibits later.

Stephen Cho (talk) 20:53, 27 March 2012 (UTC) I just added the banner on the ROM's talk page to indicate that the article is the subject of a student project at the University of Toronto.

Kevin.ghoorah (talk) 02:16, 28 March 2012 (UTC) I added a sentence from the Galleries heading and modified it to reduce wordiness. >>Kevin G

Stephen Cho (talk) 02:57, 28 March 2012 (UTC) I added some more information under the heading World Culture Galleries in the sandbox. I described the Chinese and Canadian exhibits. I will post the rest of the updated information on the World Culture galleries soon and then move the whole thing to the actual ROM page once it is completely done.

Kevin.ghoorah (talk) 15:54, 28 March 2012 (UTC) I added some new information under the Curatorial Centre heading with citations included. >>Kevin G

Jcarpen14 (talk) 23:48, 28 March 2012 (UTC) I broke up the sentence in the first paragraph, as well as made it less confusing.

Jcarpen14 (talk) 23:48, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Added another citation.

SandraNehme (talk) I'm just going to post a collective summary of what I've done up until this point:
 * Added citation to "It houses the world's largest collection of fossils from the Burgess Shale with more than 150,000 specimens"
 * Added citation to "The museum was originally under the direct control and management of the University of Toronto, until 1968, when it became an independent institution"
 * Edited grammar, broke up sentences, added citations, corrected dates (major rework) from "The Royal Ontario Museum was established on April 16, 1912, with the signing of the Ontario Legislature’s...Natural History and Fine Arts at the Toronto Normal School."
 * Expanded on information, edited grammar, corrected dates, added citations (major rework) from "Beginning in 2002, the museum underwent a major renovation...finalists in an international competition."
 * Expanded on information, corrected dates, added citation "The first phase of the Renaissance ROM...years later on June 2, 2007.
 * Changed 'about' to 'approximately', added citation to "The final cost of the project was approximately $270 million CAD." — Preceding unsigned comment added by SandraNehme (talk • contribs) 00:36, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Stephen Cho (talk) 03:08, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Updated the section on World Cultures with even more information. I will finish it off very soon.

Stephen Cho (talk) 04:23, 29 March 2012 (UTC) The World Culture Galleries section is complete!!! I will now review the whole sandbox, checking for typos and such.

Kevin.ghoorah (talk) 04:38, 29 March 2012 (UTC) I just finished checking the whole article, and i made some edits throughout the whole piece. I will check it again to see if i missed anything. >>Kevin G