User talk:Sanilamath

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Peer Review by Sanila Math for Reproductive Justice Class
Hello!

I am reviewing the article "Male Privilege."

In your lead: "Male privilege is the system of advantages or rights that are available to men solely on the basis of their sex. A man's access to these benefits may vary depending on how closely they match their society's ideal masculine norm." It may be worth considering to include an expanded definition of "male," and making it clear you are mostly referring to cisgender, heterosexual, assigned at birth men, although anyone who was assigned "male" based on their sex or who outwardly appears to be a society's traditional definition of what a man should be would benefit from male privilege.

Scope: "In addition, a disproportionate burden is placed upon women in employment when they are expected to be solely responsible for child care; they may be more likely to be fired or be denied advancement in their profession, thus putting them at an economic disadvantage relative to men.[2]" Here, you can expand on how child care is linked to people who identify as female, and possibly talk about the implications of maternity leave (and paternity leave) or link to a resource that goes more in depth on those topics.

Cultural Responses This section doesn't include cultural intersectionality from what I could see. How does male privilege affect men of color? How does their ethnicity and non-whiteness diminish the privilege they get from being male? Furthermore, how does this sense of masculinity affect women of color and perpetuate interpersonal violence within communities of color?

It would also be interesting to see a section on birth control and how that ties into male privilege in the sense that birth control and all things parenthood is mostly associated with women, and even though vasectomies are less risky and more efficient, contraception is seen as a woman's responsibility.

Sanilamath (talk) 22:27, 18 October 2021 (UTC) Sanila

Peer Review by Sanila Math for Reproductive Justice Class
Hello!

I am reviewing the "Abortion Rights Movement" article.

This article looks good as is, it is very in depth and covers a wide scope of information regarding abortion rights movements across the world. I think it would be interesting if you added in a section on how abortion rights (the right to have an abortion and the right to not have an abortion) are linked to different cultures and identities. For example, how has forced abortion disproportionately affected communities of color, and how have those experiences cultivated into the abortion rights movement today?

I think you could draw a lot of good information from the "Reproductive Justice" text we are reading for class.

Sanilamath (talk) 22:34, 18 October 2021 (UTC) Sanila