User talk:Sanjana Obili/sandbox

I think there is a few grammatical errors about the sentence structure. I also think you should make the distinction more clear that B certification is not a legal business form and does not change the company's form. It is only a certification that proves a company gives back to the community, society, environment, etc. Rattia1 (talk) 21:19, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

I think you did a good job of differentiating between B corporation and benefit corporation. However, I suggest being more specific about the business forms to make people give an initial understanding of business forms. I suggest changing the statement in the Analysis: "Here, you do not need to be a Benefit Corporation to become a Certified B Corporation in most of the states" to Here, most of the states does not require a company to be a Benefit corporation to become a B corporation. And also try adding few more sentences in the neutral voiced summary relevant to your issue. Eduplatform (talk) 03:17, 6 April 2020 (UTC)Aakanksha Polepalli

I would clean up the issue section. Rephrase it as “Is a C corporation able to switch over to a B corporation?”I liked the neutral voice summary as you explain the benefits of having a B-corp and what is needed in order to get the certificate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shaisraza (talk • contribs) 03:29, 6 April 2020 (UTC)