User talk:Sappho Cornelia Catula

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ExSilvissima Peer Review
Hi! Just finished reading over your sandbox edits and these are some of my thoughts:

The changes to the History section were really helpful, much easier to follow than the original

I found this sentence ("Aristotle is quoted as differentiating between education towards arete "...or those that are theoretical"") kind of hard to parse with the quotation, maybe it could be rephrased in some way?

I like how you moved the Plato and athletics chunk to the Athletics section

I feel like more examples could maybe be added to the Athletics section, but it's definitely clear/effective with the edits you've already made

"Achilles" could be linked to his wiki article in the Homer section

The citation edits in the Homer section made it much easier to follow for me

I'm not sure if you plan on editing the other sections in the article, but overall I think the edits you've made work really well ExSilvissima (talk) 01:52, 20 November 2021 (UTC)