User talk:Sara.Flynn

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 14:14, 26 June 2012 (UTC)

Advertising language and other problems in the proposed Nypro article
First, the article needs sources that are completely unaffiliated with Nypro in any way, shape, and form. The article especially needs high quality reliable sources to establish notability. Newspaper or magazine articles about the company (not just mentioning it in passing) will do. I saw that you mentioned on Excirial's talk page that similar companies have pages, that alone means nothing. These pages cite articles in trusted news sources such as Globes, Forbes, and Reuters. Neither does it matter that Nypro's founder is already mentioned elsewhere, as notability is not inherited. For more on how Wikipedia determines whether a site is notable or not, see the notability guidelines. As for the language: I understand that this may not have come across as advertising to you since you work for Nypro, but in the future try replacing "Nypro" with their biggest competitor and imagine how your employers would react. Ian.thomson (talk) 15:14, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "global solutions provider" - I only ever encounter these words in advertisements and in-company stuff meant to pat the company on the back (they are never used to refer to competitors, either). It's just an advertising buzzword that just means "international (corporation/incorporation/company/etc)."  "Nypro Inc is an international precision plastics products manufacturer" would be less of an advertisement.
 * "Nypro Inc is one of the world’s largest employee-owned companies" - No evidence provided, and just plain boasting. Either provide a source that is unaffiliated with the company supporting this or remove it.
 * "Nypro offers ... the world's leading companies ..." - More appropriate would be "Nypro is known for providing (services that reliable sources demonstrate this incorporation is known for)" and "Nypro has also been featured in the news for deals with (names of a few companies that news media unaffiliated with either company discusses deals with)."
 * "That classroom facility has since been augmented with www.nyproonline.com, an accredited Internet distance-learning plastics education program." - This needs a source unaffiliated with Nypro to demonstrate that this is important.

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