User talk:Sara8s001/sandbox

Hi Sara,

Sorry this is late. Nice job on the page! I only have a few suggestions; some have already been listed below. I found a few grammatical errors; the most common one being the use of "it's" instead of "its." I agree with Chase's suggestion of combining sentences. It will help improve the flow of the page; just make sure to use commas when needed. With the addition of multiple equal signs, you can create subcategories. Links to other Wikipedia pages would also be helpful. Melissausburn (talk)

Hi Sara

You have done a nice and well organized work.

I suggest to

-	Include a map to get the understanding of the fault area (something like the map that is included in your second reference).

-	Provide a more details about Precordillera fold/thrust belt in order to get the overall structure of the area.

-	Also, are there any geological importance of this fault? I mean in oil and gas industry, give a clue in understanding the tectonism, deformation or solve stratigraphic problem.

Good Luck

Hello Sara,

Great job on the wiki page. Here are some things I have found.

Combine sentences: "El Tigre fault is a 120km long major strike-slip fault located in the Western Precordillera in Argentina." and "The El Tigre fault is roughly a north-south trending fault."

Spacing: Numbers and units should have spaces in between. For example, 40 km.

Font size/style: Something about the font hurts my eyes. Was it changed? It is definitely different from other articles.

Content: "Geomorphic and 10Be exposure ages were used to calculate age and slip rate. Slip rate is estimated to be approximately 1mm/year and offsets range from 60 to 180m." - I do not think the first sentence is necessary. It seems very specific to one researcher's method of testing. You could reword it to "have been used," but as said before, using "were" in the sentence makes it extremely specific to one method of testing by one person.

Content: Why has the El Tigre Fault sparked interest in recent years?

Image: Can you show the trace of this fault on a zoomed-in map of Argentina? Possibly include cities for reference.

Figures: Your figures need more text explaining their significance.

Content: Important words within the text should be linked with.

Content: What are the controversies?

Grammar: There is a special symbol for the +/- in the special characters section in edit.

Content: More content is needed overall. What is the geologic implication of this fault?

Chasebill (talk) 01:29, 14 October 2013 (UTC)