User talk:SaraAnnLawrence

Paul Calandra
Just a couple of style notes for you regarding your recent edits to Paul Calandra: Thanks. Bearcat (talk) 17:11, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) In the infobox, we don't place the word "present" in the "term_end" field if the person is currently in office; we just leave it blank, and the infobox will denote their current incumbency by adding an "incumbent" tag.
 * 2) Also in the infobox, the "profession" shouldn't just repeat "MP for Oak Ridges-Markham", because the box already communicates that fact; it's meant to list what he did for a living before becoming the MP for Oak Ridges-Markham.
 * 3) Finally, our writing tone on Wikipedia is meant to be encyclopedic in nature, not "campaign brochure" — for example, we refer to him as "Calandra", not as "Paul", in the body text, and we don't include generic subjective statements like how he believes in community service (something that every politician in absolutely any party would claim to be just as true of themselves), but rather we stick to the objective and properly sourceable facts rather than statements of opinion.