User talk:Sarabprice/African-American women in the civil rights movement

Hi! I hope this helps with your article :)

Overall, the article is still a work in progress; at face value, it is a good article and I think this is an incredibly important topic. The article does well in mentioning important figures in the movement and their contributions to the advancement of civil rights and women’s rights. Without considering the way in which the information is presented, it is very useful and important information. If this information was organized in such a way that avoids affiliating with any position, it would be a great improvement. I think the student leans into making arguments alike the original author except for the last paragraph when discussing womanism. This paragraph does a great job at associating a term or stance with an author and thoroughly explaining it rather than reflecting on it. If they use this as a reference throughout their edits, it will greatly improve the article. Additionally, they could consider expanding the list of important women, as I would assume there were more important women that contributed to this cause. Lastly, the article still seems incomplete but if the student works on editing the tone and structure of the article, it will bring it much closer to being complete.

Gdelc03111 (talk) 03:59, 9 December 2021 (UTC)Agustin del Campo