User talk:SarahBarket/sandbox

Hi Sarah!

I remember you having some difficulty with the vest at the beginning and I think you have done a great job with this page! The timeline is unique and gives a clear breakdown on its evolution. I remember Professor R suggesting looking into the three piece suit as the vest played a key role in the ensemble... maybe including a picture of it can tie the page into today's scene? Just a thought! Again, great job!

Cjlima (talk) 20:27, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

=Juliana's Peer Review=

Overall, great job! Your page successfully meets most of the requirements given in Professor R's rubric. You use a sufficient number of scholarly sources that cover a broad spectrum of information about the vest. I think the timeline section is very helpful as it lays out the chronological evolution of the vest. One suggestion is to hyperlink key words that will further the reader's understanding of the vest, such as "waistcoat" and "three piece suit". Finally, a minor visual suggestion, is to put the typology section into bullet point format so that each individual type can be more clearly recognized. Other than that, great job!

Jkeagle (talk) 15:42, 17 November 2017 (UTC)