User talk:SarahD12345678910/Environmental racism in the United States

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The article is definitely a good start to describing environmental racism in the United States and is clear and easy to understand. I like the extensive list of scholarly sources that are incorporated and how almost all the statements are sourced and often backed by specific studies. The existing sections also have sufficient depth and clarity. The article would benefit from adding and restructuring sections to make it more clear and comprehensive. Separating out the racism component from the pollution section and expanding on that in “History” or creating another section could improve clarity. Also, moving “Health effects” to its own section not under any others could also be beneficial considering the variety of ways environmental racism can cause disparities in public health beyond pollution. Including additional sections such as “Heat islands”, or adding specific sections on different regions of the United States could be valuable. Adding a section on governmental/policy responses or proposed strategies could also serve as a conclusion and add more depth to the article. Furthermore, adding more sources/rearranging sources and specifying the studies used to back each statement could improve the reliability and neutrality of the article. In terms of flow and other minor edits, adding transitions, incorporating links to and from articles, and fixing grammatical errors would also help. Amykuriakose (talk) 05:46, 3 November 2021 (UTC)