User talk:SarahEnviro/Haida Gwaii Watchmen

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Make Haida a blue link or provide a little description about haida in the introduction

remove space from "14000" years in the history.

Education and training section- either you can add some points in it or remove the heading KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

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I think it would be useful to further explain or provide examples of some (or all) or these conservation techniques that are mentioned in the Conservation Efforts section (i.e Site Cleaning, Debris Burning, Trail Maintenance, etc.).

This sentence "Upon realizing how important protecting these lands would be, he founded the first modern iteration of the Watchmen program, starting with a hand-built cabin, constructed himself in 1980." could be edited by instead saying "starting with a hand-built cabin which Gold constructed himself in 1980."

Great article draft overall! Kyra.Pompeo (talk) 16:10, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

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Overall really good article! I really enjoyed reading about this subject! It was very informative and I liked how you divided up the article. I love the use of hyperlinks you added and would even encourage to add more, even creating more read links throughout for example see what there is as links for Captain Gold (Richard Wilson), Peter Bennett, and Parks Canada. Liv.spatol (talk) 16:15, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

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Minor edit: There is a repitition of word in the sentence "The program consists of 2-4 Watchmen who live and work as as guardians". Babatunde Fafunwa (talk) 16:17, 8 April 2024 (UTC)