User talk:Sarahbethea/sandbox

=Evaluations=

12/4/2018 Evaluation by Mark Bauhofer
Mark Bauhofer (talk)
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Meets Expectations Grammar and Punctuation looks good.

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11/14/2018 Evaluation by Mark Bauhofer
Mark Bauhofer (talk)
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Meets Expectations Grammar and Punctuation looks good.

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10/18/2018 Evaluation by MarkBauhofer
DrMichaelWright (talk) 01:15, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
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Meets Expectations Grammar and spelling looks good. Dont see any errors in your first paragraph.

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Nearly meets standard
 * "Originally, only the Kaiserburg, or Imperial Castle, stood." Stood? Stood where? This reads like it was translated by Google.
 * "Nuremberg was an' independent city-state"
 * "...and it’s independence,..." 'it's' is always a contraction of 'it is'. The apostrophe should be omitted.

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Meets standard

Good encyclopedic tone and diction.
 * "...direct rule of the Roman Emperor" should probably be written as Holy Roman Emperor, or just 'the Emperor'. Roman Emperor suggests a very different person/title.

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No major problems.

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Perfect!

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 * "...Nuremberg became an important city center of the Roman Empire." The Holy Roman Empire is not the same as the Roman Empire.

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There is enough new material here to suffice for this assignment.

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It's unclear where you're intending to place this in the current Wikipedia page. It seems like it could be integrated well with the history section (in which case the German translation is redundant - that already being at the top of the page). However, there is already material there that these paragraphs do not replace or supplement. This is, in some sense a rewrite with less information than the original.

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Meets Expectations/ however I'm still trying to understand all of this myself.

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