User talk:Sarahcohn/sandbox

Peer Review for Sarah
I think that Ava DuVernay is a great person to write about and I think you did a good job bringing up key points regarding her career as a director! In addition to bringing up "A Wrinkle in Time," you could also bring up other prominent films she has done, such as "Selma." If it would applicable, you could add more to your article by possibly going into DuVernay's early career path, which could lead to explaining how she has become a prominent black female filmmaker. Overall, I think that your contribution to the article does a great job at highlighting important aspects to DuVernay! If you wanted to expand your article, I think that adding information regarding her history as a filmmaker could be beneficial too. Scvalde (talk) 01:12, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Second Peer Review for Sarah
I looked at Sarah’s contribution for Black Female Filmmakers. The structure of her contribution is good. Sarah introduces Ava, why she’s relevant to the article, and then proceeds to list her achievements. Her achievements are related to the topic. The content stays neutral and avoids opinions. The overall content consistently stays on topic. My only suggestion for the contribution is there are no sources added. Another suggestion I would add would be that more information should be added regarding Ava’s film career. Rodkeys (talk) 19:02, 1 March 2018 (UTC)