User talk:Sarahhelennicholson/Women Who Kill

Round 1 Feedback
Hey, great to see the work you've done on your article! You've added quite a lot to the plot and production sections of the article. These seem like quality contributions that will really improve the article! I have one small suggestion, which is that you try to improve the citations in the plot section of the article some more. I also suggest that looking to more developed articles about similar films for inspiration about what kinds of content you might add. I'm really excited to see how you will continue to develop your article! Groceryheist (talk) 23:36, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

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I just finished up with your peer review and just wanted to let you know you can go ahead and take a look at that. Nice job on the edits and good luck with more editing!

Mariana Madera (talk) 22:40, 31 January 2021 (UTC)Mariana Madera

Round 2 Feedback
Hey,, (link) and  (link have left you helpful feedback on your article.  One thing I want to point out is that it looks like another Wikipedian has been working on your article since you copied it into your sandbox.  This isn't a big problem, but you'll have to merge your changes with theirs when you publish your changes in the mainspace.

When you started working on this article it was a wp:stub and I'm confident that, by the time you're done working on it, that it could be evaluated as a wp:start-class article. This is a really meaningful contribution to Wikipedia.

I suggest you take a look at my page on polishing your article for ideas for your next round of work on this project. I especially think that doing things like adding wikilinks, "also see" links, categories, and external links are good things to do when polishing an article. I also suggest that you spend some time carefully copyediting the information you've already added to make it as easy to read as possible while maintaining an wp:encyclopedic tone.

Last, I noticed that there are error messages in some of the references. Try to fix this before you're ready to publish your article.

Nice work on your article so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing it when you're done with it. Reach out to me when you think you're ready to publish it in the namespace. Groceryheist (talk) 23:10, 4 February 2021 (UTC)