User talk:Sarahnovack/sandbox

Peer Reviews
Peer Review: I found your entry very interesting, I had never heard of this organization nor this type of organization involve in the Israel-Palestinian conflict. I like that you have put a history component to your text. It brings a good background context, but how did these two groups decide to join forces? Was there a main reason for their association? Also, you talk about a list of objectives that the group has set for themselves, maybe some of them you could discuss and link them to other objectives of NGOs involve in the conflict? Overall a very interesting article, I really like that you incorporated the critics of the group. Eric Ewhitworth (talk) 16:49, 13 March 2018 (UTC) (Hope neither of you mind if I make a separate section for the peer reviews. Thought it would make them easier to see.) This is a pretty good start. You've found some good information, especially for the earlier history. I had never thought of the Women in Black before. You seem to have put in a good amount of research as well. I have a few recommendations, in case you might find them useful. I think some of these sections can use a bit more detail, which can possibly include specific examples. I think examples would be especially useful for the Activities, Recognition, and Controversy sections. You probably already know this, but don't forget "what where, why and how," if you're looking for more ideas on what to add. Another thought that passed through my mind as I was reading this, was that info on the more prominent members might useful for finding more information. I cannot confirm this, but I remember Terry Greenblatt is one of Bat Shalom's main advocates. You might be able to find some information on her, and the group by extension. I'd also like to mention that the Jerusalem Link was not the only group in which Bat Shalom was a member of, though you might know this already. There was another group called the Coalition of Women for peace. I had trouble finding info on the group when I tried Bat Shalom, but perhaps you will have better luck. With all that said, best of luck! Noah NoPet (talk) 00:07, 16 March 2018 (UTC)