User talk:Sarahqbentley

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Hello, Sarahqbentley, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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WN Bibliography Entries
Grimstead. Link appropriate words with their Wikipedia articles, like Nietzsche. Also, be sure you're picking out the information here that relates to WN. Surely Grimstead does more than just mention Mailer's essay? Hassan. "It's" = "it is". This is a bit unclear. Be sure to proofread for typos and revise for clarity. —Grlucas (talk) 20:30, 7 September 2018 (UTC)

WN Addition
OK, you have done exactly what you should have done here: you edited until you got it right. Way to go. See, you don't necessarily have to add a lot to make an impact. While I cleaned up your language a bit, your additions are in context and definitely improve the article. Keep it up! —Grlucas (talk) 12:55, 14 September 2018 (UTC)

AAD Additions
Great additions to An American Dream. Well done. Try to avoid using or referring to "the reader" in your work. Also, avoid being too general; keep your additions on-topic: in this case AAD. Finally, pay attention to the details, especially where the footnotes should fall. Often you have an extra space in there. Regardless, well done. —Grlucas (talk) 13:19, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

WWVN Bib
Good additions. Be sure to edit for typos and revise for clarity and concision. Could you get me a copy of the Broyard review? —Grlucas (talk) 14:53, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

WWVN Edit
WWVN is an abbreviation, but still needs to be italicized. Some strong additions. —Grlucas (talk) 23:57, 5 November 2018 (UTC)