User talk:Sarahtatehahn/sandbox

Grayson Kapiloff[edit] I think what you are planning to do will help the article a lot. I think that having more information on John Locke's religious background will help the reader understand what lead him to his beliefs and possibly relate to him better.

Thank You. Anabelle and I added more information on his religious beliefs and found a source about them. Sarahtatehahn (talk) 16:27, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer review[edit] This addition to the article is helpful and nicely worded. Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jpatrickc (talk • contribs) 00:15, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer review: jpatrickc
I like your revision plan, I believe your revisions will greatly aid to the substance of the article. Be sure to include more information on Locke's early life(as you plan to do in your revisions). -jpatrickc — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jpatrickc (talk • contribs) 17:36, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

We found more information on his early life but it was already in the article so we just focused on his religious beliefs and how those affected his thoughts Sarahtatehahn (talk) 16:07, 5 December 2018 (UTC)