User talk:Sarahterry2012

Your submission at Articles for creation: George A. Brakeley, Jr (January 18)
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SwisterTwister  talk  21:36, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

Fixing references at Draft:George A. Brakeley, Jr
Your footnotes weren't showing up since you didn't put the "ref" coding at the start of your cite, though you did correctly put the "/ref" at the end of each cite. I have fixed a bunch of those for you, please fix the rest so the footnotes show up.

I will say though, you can't simply cite his own works for all these facts about him; anyone can write anything about themselves. What will help a lot more is to include more coverage of him from serious news media, mentions in books, etc. It's the outside, objective coverage of him that makes an encyclopedia article, not just quoting him about himself. Makes sense? MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:53, 7 February 2017 (UTC)

Draft:George A. Brakeley, Jr
Add the template, infobox person. Then add a little summary explaining what the person does. Make paragraphs as well. This sections everything he/she has done. Start by talking about his/her early life, where he/she was born, any siblings etc. Then make a new paragraph explaining how he/she started his/her career.

If you need anymore help, ask me on my talk page, I will help you the best I can. Plum3600 (talk)

Your submission at Articles for creation: George A. Brakeley, Jr (March 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 16:15, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Draft:George A. Brakeley, Jr concern
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Your draft article, Draft:George A. Brakeley, Jr


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 08:05, 7 October 2017 (UTC)