User talk:Sarbaer324/sandbox

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I am learning so many new things from your page. I like how you kept the Jewish language and then translated it for people who are not familiar with it. All of the sections fit well within this category. However, there are two things I would change. I would flip the "What is Kashrut?" and "History" sections so that "History" comes first. As a reader who doesn't know much about this topic, it makes more sense this way. The other thing I would do differently would be in the section "History". In the second paragraph, I would switch the order of the sentences. I would start with "The Torah teaches", followed with the next sentence, then ending with "The most important". Other than these minor things, I think you are doing a great job! Russece (talk) 22:18, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

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i think that the format and layout of the article are all great. I think that you should add more of the links to other wiki articles, in the history section you could do it for Torah and Hebrew. one other critique I have is that I don't think that the Other ways to help section is a good fit. the article is about Eco-Kashrut so the section feels out of place. Your usage of the references to back up all of your claims are good i don't think a saw some thing that wasn't sourced. Wsxcftyhnmko (talk) 02:59, 23 October 2018 (UTC)