User talk:Sareidle/sandbox

Peer Review
It seems like you've done a lot of good detail work in expanding on her article. I think the sections you've added contribute well to the overall coverage of her life and craft, and many of the small edits you've done are important for clarity. Everything seems to be properly neutral and well-sourced.

I did not catch any grammar mistakes, but I would recommend checking again in case I missed any.

My suggestions would be to try to expand more on the new sections you've introduced if at all possible, which it looks like you plan to do, and consider how the organization of information contributes to how it is read. For example, I'm not sure that you need as many subsections under Prospero's professional life, as it may read smoother without them.

Keep up the good work!

Yutuzi (talk) 05:35, 11 March 2019 (UTC)