User talk:Sarmeirs/sandbox


 * I don't quite understand why some of the sentences were underlined. Is there some reason?


 * [Modern South Korean horror films are typically distinguished by stylish directing, themes of social commentary, and genre blending] For this sentence in your introduction paragraph, I think it would be great if you could further elaborate on this by giving some examples or some specific explanation.


 * In the 'The female ghost' section, I think [Her deep feeling of resentment is cold enough to freeze the hot air that occurs during those months.] might be too informal. (I think it's a bit poetic) Again, I think you could add more information to this section. I believe it's better to change the tone to be more objective. I think for now the overall tone of the section is subjective.


 * Same for the 'Revenge' section, I believe you could add more information to it. I think it lacks an explanation of how Korean horror films uses the theme of revenge. And for this part, [Many of these films are marketed to other countries as "Asian Extreme"], is there any examples of it?


 * Lastly, the section '2010 Korean Horror Film Festival' could be merged into other paragraphs. I don't think it's necessary to give its own section. You could add a section with a label 'Influence of horror film' and add '2010 Korean Horror Film Festival' and 'Influential Korean horror films'. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Try5607 (talk • contribs) 22:11, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Response
Sorry for the confusion, I thought the comments about changes would be more visible. The underlined sections and fragments are what I have added to the already existing article on Korean Horror. Because of this I don't know if I should edit the sections that already exist. I agree that the part about female ghosts is pretty subjective and poetic for a wikipedia article but it's almost entirely quotes from the sources cited. I'm not sure if I should get rid of that one sentence since it's explaining a (common?) Korean expression about ghosts and weather and doesn't easily sound clinical. I agree that I can add more specific information about revenge and tropes of modern Korean horror. That will increase the words I'm adding as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sarmeirs (talk • contribs) 18:51, 4 December 2018 (UTC)