User talk:Sarmick123/White day

1) This article does a good job of explaining the holiday in a detailed and unbiased manner.

2) You could add more information about how the holiday is celebrated in China. If you find a source, you could also mention how the holiday spread to other countries.

3) I noticed that I could go into more detail about the people's lives, and find sources to have a section about their life. Tayloryn (talk) 17:56, 6 March 2020 (UTC)

1. I appreciate how she gave a deeper explanation of the purpose of "White Day" and other factors that contribute to White Day.

2. I don't see anything that I think she should change because she added a lot of useful information.

3. A thing that I noticed that could be applicable to my own article is how specific/detailed she was about the origin of where White Day began. (Saige)