User talk:Sasamaro/sandbox

This rationale is helpful because you provide specific areas that need improvement, and you connect it to SDG6. One note: when you address the "urgency" issue you bring up, be sure that you are presenting facts in a neutral tone. Because of the facts you present, readers can determine on their own whether they believe the issue is "urgent." Debbie Goss (talk) 19:39, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
On the 'International Centre for Settlement of Investment' section of the article, there is a sentence that needs citation. I think it would be great to work on that. I really liked the 'Right to water in domestic law' part of this article since it included many places to support the article. But I still think it would be better to add more places if possible. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wpdus0525 (talk • contribs) 09:18, 19 November 2019 (UTC)