User talk:Sascha Gruss

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Automated Pain Recognition (February 27)
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AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 00:50, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

MfD nomination of Draft:Automated Pain Recognition
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Hello, Sascha Gruss

Thank you for creating Automated Pain Recognition.

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signed,Rosguill talk 20:28, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

Hello Rosguill, thank you very much for your comment. We will try our best to improve this article with reliable, secondary sources. I assume you refer to the references [7][8][10-15]? If so: [7] & [8] : I will check other sources [10] : This is just a survey about existing methods and data bases. This should be fine? [11-15] : These are papers about pain data bases and where and how to get it. All data bases are free available for almost anyone. Should I remove it (or put the URLs to the data bases if they exist)? Again, thank you very much, Sascha. Sascha Gruss (talk) 08:21, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , I don't have time right now to review everything in detail, but honestly I'm most concerned about the information that isn't backed up by any footnotes at the moment (and particularly the "Potential applications" section which I removed). Glancing at the claims that 7 and 8 are supporting, I think I'd actually be ok with keeping the citation as long as the wording is rephrased from "Measurements usually focus..." to "Measurements can include" or something else along those lines. The main remaining set of sourced claims that strike me as a bit problematic is the list of databases, since the cited papers seem to for the most part introduce those databases. We shouldn't mention such work except after it has been analyzed by additional sources. signed,Rosguill talk 17:09, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

I've made the changes, added one more source and linked it to the german page. Hope this is fine now. Sascha Gruss (talk) 08:21, 22 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks, it looks improved. There's still a few paragraphs with no footnotes that could probably use a citation or two, but I think that my concerns have been addressed enough to remove the OR tag. signed,Rosguill talk 18:09, 22 April 2020 (UTC)