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NOAH DELGADILLO PEER REVIEW OF RUSSIAN FAMINE
Skimming over the article, I could immediately see in the "political uses" section there is a citation out of place or not cited properly. The citation sticks out in red colored text. I thought the death toll was overrespresented as a whole and the article doesn't talk much about the conditions faced by the citizens. A lot of our readings up to Module 5 talk about the sentiment of the citizens undergoing this famine and it would be a good addition to add this into the article. For example, what they were able to eat when they could find rations such as bread and grains. I thought the article was overall neutral as it should be. In the "origins" section of the article there is a sentence I believe is out of place at the very end stating, "Some peasants resorted to cannibalism." This should be added to a different section or a different area of the current section, just not randomly at the end.