User talk:SatchieNZ

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Satchie12! Thank you for your contributions. I am EvM-Susana and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! EvMsmile (talk) 00:24, 8 February 2016 (UTC)
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Again, welcome! EvMsmile (talk) 00:24, 8 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vermicomposting digester (March 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  21:12, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

Suggestions for improvement
I would recommend the following as suggestions for improvement:
 * Stick a bit more to the standard headings that we have defined in the Manual of Style for sanitation articles.
 * Explain the context, i.e. where does it fit in with all the other composting toilets
 * Use more wikilinks, i.e. links to other Wikipedia articles. Note: a term is usually wiki-linked twice only: once in the lead and once in the main text (but not again if it appears again, unless it is a very long article)
 * Very important: you have listed references but they are neither precise (like missing page number), nor are they available with one click online; you need to provide a URL where the article can be viewed; a DOI number is always good. If it's behind a paywall then at least a link to where the abstract is available. If it's open access: all the better! If it's not yet online and is free of copyright, it could also be put in the SuSanA library so that it gets a URL.
 * The article needs some photos or schematics to clarify the concept. They are easy to upload and insert, I can explain to you how it's done. EvMsmile (talk) 13:10, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vermifilter (August 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

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LaMona (talk) 21:42, 11 August 2016 (UTC)