User talk:Savanahharvey

Peer Review: Jrobins618 (talk) 02:40, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

Although it is hard to write a whole Wikipedia article on a single gesture, this group did a very good job of developing the main points of the infamous face palm. What I liked most about the page is its use of photos. Not only did they include multiple photos, but using statues from accent Greece gives the topic a somewhat valid and important feel. That being said, I think the group should have elaborated on the photo of the statue. Is this the only instance where Greek sculptors used the gesture? Is there any history that backs up their perception of it. Because it is such a narrow topic, I feel the group could have been a little more creative with their paragraphs. For example, one paragraph could include similar gestures. I was a little disappointed with the lack of sources in the "Internet Use" section. This section seems to be one that could be referenced the most. This section could also include the multiple social media sites that use "face palm". Like Savanah stated, I know of multiple times where i found face palm used on Twitter. Besides these additions, I think the page is developed enough to where it is useful and informative. Wikipedia is a reference for everything, even gestures, and needs to expand on this idea if it wants to continue the success it has. Jrobins618 (talk) 02:40, 26 March 2014 (UTC)