User talk:Savannarainier

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Jackie's Peer Review
I would look into trying to divide the section "Legal foundations and recognition" into some subheadings. There is a lot of text and it would be more readable if it was divided into smaller categories. I am not quite sure what "jurisprudence" means so maybe including a definition below the heading would be beneficial. Under the "India" heading, it mentions that there were 2 court cases pertaining to the right to water but no description is included that describes the court cases. I would like to know at least the names if possible. Lastly, the critiques and alternatives section is empty so adding to that will help complete the article more. Overall, there is a lot of good information presented in a neutral and knowledgeable manner. Aside from adding to some sections, this article is looking really good! Jackie Kerth (talk) 07:34, 19 November 2019 (UTC)