User talk:Sayyonee19

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (February 15)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (June 28)
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LaMona (talk) 04:05, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (July 7)
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SwisterTwister  talk  19:26, 7 July 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Ally Adnan


Hello, Sayyonee19. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Ally Adnan".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 03:16, 16 January 2017 (UTC)

Nomination of Ally Adnan for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Ally Adnan is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Ally Adnan until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Saqib (talk) 05:11, 20 November 2017 (UTC)

Ally Adnan
Just like you, I happen to like Ally Adnan's journalism and newspaper articles as a music critic. So I went ahead and tried to improve his article that you created recently. I am a retired Pakistani-American engineer living in the US with grown-up kids. I edit Wikipedia as a hobby and also love Pakistani music. Have been doing it for nearly 5 years now. I still need to do some remaining finishing touches on the article which I'll complete shortly. Hopefully, we both can save the article from Deletion. Allow me a few more hours and I'll be done with it. In the meantime, feel free to leave me a message here on your Talk page or on my Talk page. Best Regards and my Salaams...A fellow Pakistani...Ngrewal1 (talk) 20:22, 22 November 2017 (UTC)

Nice to connect with you here sir. I am still figuring the 'editing' and 'posting' features on Wikipedia so not sure if you will get this message or not. If you do, please let me know. I appreciate your time and effort in saving this article from deletion. I think his work and articles justify an entry here but have been challenged with some of the objections raised by reviewers. As part of my latest edits I included multiple videos and TV program recordings. So let's see if those and your polishing helps. Thanks. sayyonee19


 * Thanks for the appreciation of my editing work on Ally Adnan. You are the one who deserves most of the credit for leaving me more than 11 reliable sources at your created article to work with. Like you say, I just polished up the article. But I am glad you took it the 'right way' my well-meaning attempt. Even on Wikipedia, I have run into some cynics in the past who take everything 'the wrong way' and do not assume good faith like Wikipedia management wants us to do. Also I have written a Keep for your article for Ally Adnan on the Articles for deletion Discussion Page just now. I also encourage you to keep participating in that Discussion Page to SAVE other good and deserving Pakistan-related articles despite the challenges from the cynics. We have to be bold and not be afraid to write a Keep on that Discussion Page. We should step forward to support each other. Please feel free to leave me a note on my Talk page about anything you want to discuss or have questions in the future. By the way, I have finished editing Ally Adnan for now. I have made it a Category:Stub-Class biography articles for both of us or anyone else can add to it in future.....THANKS...Ngrewal1 (talk) 23:33, 22 November 2017 (UTC)

I got a chance to look at the article you edited and must say that, though shortened, now most of it can be directly sourced to the articles referenced. This I am sure will help in keeping the article. Additionally, this interview was published recently on Ally Adnan: https://dailytimes.com.pk/147213/music-dance-not-list-five-items-declared-haram/. Do you think we can incorporate additional information from here into the article. With your experience I would rather you take a look at it first. Additionally what else can we do do move this out of the 'delete' list and get it approved once and for all? sayyonee19

I am not sure why we are running into so much resistance but now Saqib has trimmed the Ally Adnan article down to just 2 lines and 6 references! I am not too experienced on Wikipedia but is this something that's normal? Such scrutiny for a biographical stub has left me confused and scratching my head. I have read many many articles on here with much fewer references and citations. sayyonee19

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (executive) (December 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JSFarman was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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JSFarman (talk) 04:46, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Ally Adnan (executive) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Ally Adnan (executive), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:35, 13 May 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Ally Adnan (executive)


Hello, Sayyonee19. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Ally Adnan".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  18:43, 12 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (executive) (February 4)
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 SITH   (talk)   21:20, 4 February 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (executive) (February 9)
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Theroadislong (talk) 12:34, 9 February 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ally Adnan (executive) (April 13)
 Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Ally_Adnan_(executive) Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by K.e.coffman was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Fails WP:BASIC / WP:CREATIVE.

K.e.coffman (talk) 15:56, 13 April 2019 (UTC)