User talk:Sbeau7/sandbox

Peer Review
Your edits are very helpful, you have proper citations from journals which are better sources than citations that come for blogs that can be biased. You also have facts presented that give out neutral and substantial information that is well worded. Your next step might be to find another source to back up the article since you put that was editors said content was something that needed to be edited further. Sdunc2 (talk) 16:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response This peer review really eased my mind. I am glad that someone other than me believed that these edits are necessary. I tried very hard to keep my edits unbiased. This subject can be especially biased hence why I tried to use scholarly journals more. I agree that my facts are neutral. I am happy to know that my facts are also well worded. I am a little unsure as to why I need more sources. I did not intend on clarifying or adding sources so I am unsure how to proceed with this feedback; in which, I will not be incorporating it into my edits. Sbeau7 (talk) 16:55, 1 May 2018 (UT

Peer Review
Although this topic can be prone to bias, your edits are neutral and informative. The citations are flawless, and most come from scholarly journals which are reliable and credible. I think you are making a substantial edit to the article, and your information can help people better understand the topic of Body Image. Your edits are beneficial to the article because you are incorporating it with the research that's already there.Cvillalva (talk) 18:37, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response After reading this, I am very confident that my edits are beneficial. It took me a while to get my citations right so I am very happy that it was noticed. Also, I am glad that my edits are neutral and informative. My goal was to not only benefit this wikipedia page but also to inform people on other aspects of body image. Body image is a very large topic and is very hard to fully elaborate on. With this peer review in mind, I will no be making any changes to my edits because my peer reviewer did not say to make any. Sbeau7 (talk) 18:48, 1 May 2018 (UTC)