User talk:Scannava/sandbox

Peer Review
I think that you need to add a little bit more in the introduction. Also, This article could be improved by adding some more sources. I feel like a picture would help. Possibly a picture of a group of people celebrating this observance to make people understand that this is important and of significance. A picture with a caption about what people are doing to celebrate would make the page seem credible. I also think that you do not necessarily need the entire chart of all US holidays, but whatever you think will help the article. I think that all the subtopics you made are very clear and helpful. I was easy for me, as a reader, to navigate through your article page. I think that all necessary information was presented in this article. Since I saw the article before and after editing, I can confidently say that you made a substantial contribution to this article. Schewevp (talk)schewevp

Ideas for Project Articles
-https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Damba -https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:New_user_landing_page&page=Bettina+Villars -https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_Disability_Employment_Awareness_Month

Scannava (talk) 15:55, 3 October 2018 (UTC)