User talk:Scastr5/sandbox

Bay of Kotor is in need of editing. It needs more sources and better structure.
 * Approved. You don't need to add sources for this assignment, just copyedit. Of course you can add sources on your own or use this article for our next assignment as well. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:35, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You only changed the spelling of one word. That's not enough. Besides, "harbours" is correct under the rules of British spelling, which is allowed on WP. Josef Horáček (talk) 14:41, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Articles in Need of Sources
2014 FIFA World Cup preparations — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scastr5 (talk • contribs) 22:06, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Approved. Don't forget to sign your posts on talk pages. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:34, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:36, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good job adding the sources and new information! Josef Horáček (talk) 19:24, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Article In Need of a Lead
Filming of James Bond in the 1960s — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scastr5 (talk • contribs) 18:46, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

The article has good structure overall. It provides a lot of background information on the movies filmed throughout the 60s. it is missing a section to tie all of the films together. The article needs a solidifying lead in section to provide a brief summary of what the reader will be looking at in the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scastr5 (talk • contribs) 02:48, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Great project. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:21, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * About your lead: I'd start with the sentence "Ian Fleming, the writer who created the James Bond series, lived to see the success..." Everything before that is unnecessary. Instead, you should add some info about the commercial success of the films. Josef Horáček (talk) 09:09, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Nice job. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:57, 10 March 2015 (UTC)