User talk:Scheckelse/sandbox

Article Evaluation
The article that is being evaluated is Norse colonization of North America.

Christopher's Peer Review
Your first paragraph needs some work in regards to tone. It feels more opinionated and less neutral.

You have a lot of good sources and are used appropriately throughout.

"The Norse mainly relied on the Nordrsetur hunt, a communal hunt of migratory harp seals that would take place during spring" This sentence concerns me slightly. You have citations, which is great, but I wonder if you paraphrased it or copied it. If you paraphrased it, that's great, if not please consider doing so.

Otherwise, you have a lot of good information here, just work on the tone of the article and then you should be fine! Allencr10 (talk) 17:03, 27 February 2018 (UTC)