User talk:Scherma3840J/Bem Sex-Role Inventory

There are some minor spelling and grammar errors. In the intro paragraph, the first sentence makes more sense if gender role is plural. I would also take out the first "on" in the sentence "participants rate themselves on based on.." Also, I think you mean dispersed, not disbursed. In the last sentence, behavior should also be plural. In the very last section, it should be spelled "gullible" instead of "guillable". My last critique is just simply linking more of the words to their pages, especially ones that aren't used in everyday language. I might also consider reorganizing, because I feel like the "reliability and validity" section should be last.

Other than these small errors, the article seems clear, accurate, and trustworthy.

Jaclyn3840J (talk) 16:34, 1 November 2012 (UTC)