User talk:Schneids.10

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Hello, Schneids.10, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Gender roles
Hi, Schneids.10. I've taken a look at your sandbox. First of all, thank you for diligently sourcing your draft. I think you've chosen reliable sources which have a fair amount to say about the topic. It also seems (from a glance, I don't have copies of all your sources handy) that you've summarized material fairly.

Wikipedia has a current article on Gender role. It's large; some parts are pretty good, others are fair at best. But it covers a great deal on the topic. I'd like you to take a close look at that article and see which parts fall short or could be improved by the work you've done here. You could also look at Language and gender or other articles on the topic to see where you might be able to improve wikipeida's overall coverage of the topic. Let me know what you think once you've looked at those articles and I'll help you edit and improve your draft so it can be a real improvement to 1 or maybe 2-3 articles. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:24, 21 April 2016 (UTC)