User talk:SchroCat/litter tray 15

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 * "Hare's larger share due to the loss from Donald's rent". I'm lost with this line: why would he have earned more because of an arrears of a fellow lodger?  "Due" would be an Americanism in this context; BrEng would use this word for "moisture" or "the bus is due, shortly". Are you okay with changing that?   Cassianto Talk   19:38, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Does this work? – SchroCat (talk) 19:51, 3 July 2016 (UTC)