User talk:Schwingp/Scotoplanes/Gomescl Peer Review

First, I would recommend making your changes Bold which would've made it easier to find. Other than that great work with adding new information. I like how your article didn't provide much information, especially regarding physiology. However, you have added a substantial amount of information of crucial interest.

In terms of tone (as you asked), I think it flows smoothly and has a neutral but informative tone - Good Job!