User talk:Sci92

Lauren Phoenix
Just want to say I'm watching the changes you're making and so far they're largely good. I would advise you to take a look at the Wikipedia Manual of Style and especially the one for Biographies. For instance, you'll find that the manual states there should be an opening paragraph which summarizes who the person is and why they are significant. It also suggests that the person's last name be used in the article as "(t)he use of the first name gives the impression that the writer knows the subject personally, which, even if true, is not relevant."

Beyond that, it's shaping up as pretty good so far. Tabercil 03:31, 22 May 2007 (UTC)