User talk:SciCommbyDani/sandbox

Lake page edits
Nice work on your edits, you found some good information to add!

I think you can remove the sentence "The lake was also home to many varieties of fish, plants, bacteria, and other organisms." This will be covered in another student's section.

I suggest rewording the claim that Paul Smith built the first known settlement on the lake. The area has been inhabited by Native Americans for thousands of years so it's not really accurate.

Avoid using quotations. Rewrite the sentences at the end of the paragraph so that they are in your own words, then include a citation.

Check the author names on your citations. There should be multiple authors on the last one for sure, and C. Laxson's first name is Corey, not Craig. Egeorge1 (talk) 20:30, 15 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Also wanted to add that you did a good job linking to other Wikipedia pages in your section! Egeorge1 (talk) 20:31, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Your section also has quite a bit of overlap with Charles' section. Work together when editing to make sure your sections complement each other - you may need to delete or move some info around. Egeorge1 (talk) 20:36, 15 March 2023 (UTC)