User talk:Sclar010

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Hello, Sclar010, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello, I was assigned to peer review your article! After looking through what you have posted, I am impressed with what you have posted so far! A few things I noticed that could use so tweaking would be to include a lead section. It would set a good precedent for what the article will include. Additionally, incorporating a more neutral tone in the writing for the article would instill a less biased voice. Shira Kaplan's hobbies don't seem to fit with an objective overview of her accomplishments, so maybe omitting them from the article would be a good idea. Otherwise you did a terrific job, keep up the good work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Erikaleighwilson (talk • contribs) 01:05, 20 April 2018 (UTC)