User talk:ScopeCreep

It has been suggested that I ask you, as the one who added the article tags to the new article Lessac Technologies, how I might improvde the article to make it less advert or self-promotional sounding. I have, in fact, just now tried to identify and change the words/phrases I thought might be a problem. Would you mind taking a look at it now and letting me know if I have missed the point in some way? Thank you. Yoursinbooks (talk) 21:38, 15 May 2012 (UTC)